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NaNoWriMo 2017: Virgin Killer Club - Meet The Cast

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God helps us, I'm doing a hentai story for National Novel Writing Month. (Image made in ComiPo!)

It's...

Virgin Killer Club!
A tongue-in-cheek (among other things) hentai pastiche!

Synopsis:

It's Tomoya's final year at Fuyuki High School, and he's still a virgin, unlike his fellow classmates who have all gone on crazy sexual misadventures. The only girls in his class he knows of are all either total prudes (like Rin, the class president who frowns on all lewd things), not interested (like Hibiki, the resident nerd who's utterly given up on having a boyfriend so she can focus on her studies), or too young (like Shinobu, who despite being in her final year looks younger than everyone). Even the resident school slut Manako refused to sleep with Tomoya, and she's even slept with her brother!

Desperate, Tomoya sends out an anonymous ad for someone, anyone, to have sex with him.

After three months, somebody finally answered the ad (and a fellow virgin to boot!), but upon arriving at a love hotel to meet them, he's shocked beyond belief to find it was actually his classmate Akari, a cold-but-blunt girl who's never really expressed any feelings towards Tomoya. Just as desperate as he is, she agrees to let him take her virginity, and the two try to have sex anyway.

Emphasis on try.

But after an awkward-but-satisfying night together, the dark cloud hanging over both their heads is lifted: they no longer have to worry about being virgins anymore. But what they do have to worry about is that all of their friends have noticed a change in the two, and they're just as curious about this whole sex thing as well. Just when Tomoya thought he had to worry about never getting to have sex, now it looks like he's about to have too much...


Notes:

After the ultra-dark Voidspawn and Where The Zombies At?, the ultra-violent Loveless City, and ultra-satirical We're Watching You (And We're Bored As Hell), I've decided to write something a little more optimistic: erotica! That's right: I'm writing good ol' smut this year! Virgin Killer Club! is partly a more realistic depiction of what it'd be like to be a hentai protagonist with awkwardly realistic sex scenes and a look at the desperation and loneliness of a typical hentai character, but it's also a heartwarming coming-of-age story with a super-happy ending. I originally intended for this to be a School Days-esque deconstruction, but then I decided, "You know what? Enough dark stories: let's just have fun here."

In addition to telling a story, I really want to go into talking about the psychology of sex, loneliness, and obsession with virginity. Naturally, the disastrous and awkwardly funny sex scenes are all based on true stories. If the only thing you've ever known about sex has been from porn, prepare to have your expectations shattered, just as the main character has his expectations shattered.

As you'll see in the cast list, you'll notice some minor details that hint that the characters are deeper than their established archetypes (especially if you listen to the image songs, which are actually pretty dark). I'm not going to go for Cabin in the Woods or Doki Doki Literature Club levels of subversion; I just want to give the characters more depth and gently play with the readers' expectations.


Meet the Cast:

(Note: Links for image songs lead to English covers. Feel free to search for the Japanese versions if you want those instead. Yes, I am aware they are very melancholic; this story is still a Spaztique story, which means hideously flawed characters.)

Tomoya Itou - The Hentai Protagonist!
Blood Type: A
Hobby: Jogging, martial arts
Likes: Visual novels, his friends
Dislikes: Being alone, bullies
Image Song: Drowning In A Wave of Sadness
Profile: Tomoya Itou of Class 3-4 is a modest track club star of Fuyuki Academy. Despite being in-shape and having a decent social circle, he's never had a girlfriend. Worse, his male friends all have had sex by their senior year, and none of his female friends are interested in him, making him feel really insecure. His insecurity kills his self-confidence, turning off women, and feeding into his insecurity in an endless loop. To make matters worse, his older brother Ichiya had the same problem, eventually becoming a hikikomori and killing himself, and Tomoya is terrified he will end up like his brother. It isn't until meeting Akari that he breaks the cycle, but his sexual awakening may come with a new set of problems...

Akari Kirishima - The Tsundere!
Blood Type: B
Hobby: Dancing, listening to music, Kendo
Likes: Romance novels, cuddling, winning arguments
Dislikes: Isolation, people who don't pay attention
Image Song: Lost One's Weeping (Piano Version)
Profile: Akari has never had any luck finding a boyfriend, or even just a simple hookup: every single one of her love confessions has been rejected for one reason or another. If that weren't enough, she's terrified of Class Representative Rin Fujimiya, who is notorious for bullying couples, meaning asking out anyone in Class 3-4 is forbidden. Despite being a star of the Kendo Club and a long history of good grades, Akari feels like a failure for not getting the one thing she's ever wanted: romance. Despite her rough exterior, Akari is a hopeless romantic, and she's scared if she misses out on a high school romance, it'll haunt her for life. She settles for having sex with Tomoya out of desperation, but despite wanting no strings attached (and really not liking him), she catches feeling very quickly...

Shinobu Nanase - The Hyperactive Loli!
Blood Type: O
Hobby: Baking (but not very good at it), jogging, rock climbing
Likes: Candy, sports, American movies
Dislikes: Being treated like a kid, people acting down on themselves
Image Song: Drop Pop Candy
Profile: Shinobu is a hyperactive tomboy and Tomoya's female equal on the track team. She can eat her weight in sugar daily, but thanks to a hyperactive metabolism, she always stays tiny... Too tiny. Shinobu entered Fuyuki Academy two years late, meaning she's 19 going on 20, in hopes she would develop by then and not be treated differently. Unfortunately, she's still maintained the body of a middle-schooler, and she's super self-conscious about it. She hopes to travel the world in hopes somebody overseas would look past her looks (or perhaps like her because of them). She's best friends with Tomoya, but he's never reciprocated her feelings since he's always assumed she was too young for him. To make matters worse, with Shinobu's 20th birthday coming up, she worries she'll basically go into adulthood never having experience any form of romance. That is, until Tomoya learns of her real age, as well as her feelings for him...

Ryoko Itou - The Bratty Twin Sister!
Blood Type: A
Hobby: Shopping, swimming, hanging out with friends
Likes: Comedy movies, the ocean
Dislikes: Being second-best or ignored, people she's jealous of
Image Song: Ikanaide
Profile: When Ryoko and Tomoya were little, they got along just fine, but as they grew older, Ryoko became second-best to her twin brother in every aspect. Well, every aspect but one: their social lives. Ryoko prides herself on having a high social status among her fellow students and looks down on Tomoya, regularly making fun of him for not having a girlfriend. Once she begins believing Akari is Tomoya's girlfriend, she begins having her own crisis since she herself has never been able to keep a boyfriend, either rejecting the ones that like her or being too bossy to the ones she did like and driving them away. She begins asking Tomoya for pointers, which begins to mend their broken relationship, but things take a very interesting turn when she begins asking him about sex... (Yes, this story goes there.)

Manako Amagai - The Pervert!
Blood Type: B
Hobby: Sex, theater, watching porn
Likes: Sex, honesty, good communication skills, and sex. (Yes, sex is listed twice. She likes sex.)
Dislikes: Dishonest people, hypocrites, selfish people, resorting to texts to communicate
Image Song: Hotel Moonside
Profile: Manako is the "school bicycle": everyone's had a ride. Incredibly nice, extremely knowledgeable about sex and how to maintain relationships, and with a flair of being a trickster mentor, Manako is respected by everyone but the prudes of Fuyuki Academy. The only offputting thing about her is that she's constantly thinking about sex and is notorious for sexually experimenting on her younger brother. Initially, Tomoya goes to see Manako in hopes of losing his virginity, but she rejects him, thinking he's gay. It takes another shot later on for Tomoya to get his foot in the door, after his confidence has risen from his first time having sex, where she teaches Tomoya things about his body he didn't even know were possible...

Hibiki Suzuya - The Stoic Childhood Friend!
Blood Type: AB
Hobby: Studying
Likes: Studying, pushing down bad feelings
Dislikes: Emotions, feeling lonely
Image Song: Clean Freak
Profile: Hibiki and Tomoya grew up together very closely, but Hibiki has always been too shy to express her feelings to Tomoya, nor any boy for that matter. Worse, no boy has ever expressed interest in the plain-looking Hibiki, who spends most of her time by herself. Because of this, she's completely given up on any thought of ever finding love and has decided that she will focus 100% on getting good grades and a good career. Tomoya is the only person she regularly hangs out with, and since he's never expressed any interest in her before, it's seemed like he never would... until he did. From that, Hibiki begs Tomoya to "ruin" her...

Rin Fujimiya - The Strict Class Representative!
Blood Type: B
Hobby: Reading business books, mixed martial arts
Likes: Enforcing rules, beating up couples
Dislikes: Couples, any form of lewdness, turtles
Image Song: Mind Brand
Profile: The infamous Class Representative of Class 3-4, Rin has efficiently enforced the rules of the class and kept it a well-running machine, but above all else, her #1 rule is no lewd activity in the classroom. If she catches anyone flirting, reading illicit materials, hugging, kissing, anything, you're going home with at least a black eye. However, according to students who used to know Rin, she wasn't always like this, and it's only gotten worse in recent times. It's up to the main characters to find out the secret past of Rin and hopefully get her to stop attacking couples, or it could mean doom for Tomoya and whichever girl he chooses...

Haruomi Honda - The Goofy Best Friend!
Blood Type: AB
Hobby: Chess, programming, playing violin
Likes: Visual novels, porn, classical music
Dislikes: Unknown...
Image Song: Pathos
Profile: Out of all of the friends that Tomoya had that went on wild sexcapades, Haruomi was the only one who still had time to still hang with Tomoya. Afraid of Class Representative Rin Fujimiya, Haruomi keeps all of his romance off-campus. He's the most knowledgeable person Tomoya knows in regards to romance and is always there to help him out. However, as Tomoya's sexual journey begins, he stumbles onto a dark secret of Haruomi's that will threaten their friendship...

Feel free to ask any questions regarding this project!
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lequinni's avatar
Did you finished this? I'm interested in taking a look